Do Review my Blog Desire v/s Destiny it has stories,poems and MS Paint :)

Hi rahul, I went through your blog and did a bit of a reading. The content is good, your language is nice and you have the necessary fluency in imparting the ideas. Following are the few points I would like to underline.

1. The page view widget is way over the recent post title. It is as though the most important widget in the entire blog. You could pull it a bit below.

2. Remove the facebook badge and form a page for your blog (preferrably its name, followed by yours) and add the facebook plugin so that readers can like your page and promote it. A badge is of no use in such a context.

3. If you haven't yet noticed, then the area in your blog that is actually covered by your text is very less and confined to the middle. You could increase the width in template designer settings.

4. You could change the colour and make it a bit attractive.

5. Now an important blogging practice. I happen to see in that 'Confession-I Hit and Ran' you exhibited some mere disregard for a reader's comment. I have no idea if you have something personal against him or something, but had you replied in a more polite way, things would have been better. It's your blog, so you should be the 'forgiving' type. You must know, you could always screen the comments that are coming.

Rest is all great! You have done a good job with the poems too.That's all form me. Feel free to stop by in my blog also...

-Devan

Hello, 

Deavan Thanks for taking time for the honest feedback , I would surely act upon what ever you have said , Thanks a lot !!! 

Devan , made a few changes already please share your feedback

well Devan Harikumar I went through your blog and need to discuss a lot of things with you !!

Please contact at xs2rahulz@yahoo.com !! 

You can distribute the widgets on both sides Rahul. Change the layout. The left side of your blog is completely free, right? Explot that. :)Important things like 'about me' could be put in the top on the left side.

it were on both sides earluier but to stress on the blog more i made them on one side

Thanks a lot @devan : 

After lot of changes , Finally I am done with the overhaul of the blogs.

Thanks a lot for your time !!!

Dear Rahul,

The new layout is good.

Mention what your blog is all about, how it is helpful to readers.

Ishita

www.investmentbazar.com

Thanks Ishita !!! I should surely add them !!! 

Good blog Rahul. It's neat. Maybe too neat. For once I felt that I am on a discussion forum. I'd love it if you changed the background colour from white to some other light colour, yellow, green, sky blue... The posts are good. Easy to read.

http://abhyudayatoons.blogspot.com/ http://abhyudayahindi.blogspot.com http://abhyudayadoses.blogspot.com http://imeether.blogspot.com http://abhyudayamuses.blogspot.com

Thanks man @abhyudaya!! 

Its really nice to hear from you !! Well I have changed the color again !

Hi Rahul, your blog template looks girly, post should be min 400 words long..rest is fine.

Hello Sona

Thanks a lot

I will try to improve

Your blog looks simply fine.Keep Rocking! 

Thanks a alot @asiya !!! ;)

Hi Rahul, was going through your blog just now, you have got some really interesting topics back there! Some topics are down right bold and caught my interest. Will surely be coming back for more reads. I like your Blog name "desire v/s destiny", but I felt you should Bring the Title of your blog to the centre and perhaps change its font and color so that its more eye catching. Other than that, I got no complaints :)

@neha :

thanks a lot , i ill try to do that , do keep coming back , cheers !!!

that is a very artistic blog you have there. and an artists blog should have greater design, you can probably get or make a much better background instead.  try different color combination it has a lot of effect on the visitor, and ofcourse you have 16 million combinations to try from 

a self hosted wordpress blog can give you much more options for customization. its not too expensive $3 per month == INR 150 and INR 500 per year for domain and INR 150 per year for .info domain.

have a great time blogging!

@chaitanya 

; Thanks a lot dear , I must think in that direction 

Your blog strikes a graceful balance between intellect and emotions...It is not excessively verbose and is interspersed with reflections on quality issues of life..

Thanks a lot pallavi , It really motivates me a lot dear !

Hello Rahul

Your content is really good. The stories are short and well written. The layout looks clean with a easily readable font. One thing you may want to consider would be changing the number of posts that show up on a page. With 10 posts, it seems to be a long scroll to the bottom.

Thanks a lot Ramakant for your Time , I guess I should work out on what u have said 

Thanks again

Hey DvD, 

Nice blog you have there. I would like to point out a few things, though, quite frankly and I do emphasise that you take it in the best way possible.

Your content and the matter that you wish to present is really good, but being a grammar **** myself, i would suggest you use a text editor like MS Word before you post your posts.

You might want to check out the footer of your individual posts, there seems to be a problem with the boundaries.

Hope you take this in the right spirit.

Regards.

@II

loved ur review , i m already working on these things

:)

thanks for ur time