Looking for feedback on my blog

Hey Ishita,

I like your poem its very nice,  and I read your post about the land owner and the rent issue, you can make a police complaint and actualy i am pretty sure you can tell them that he verbally abused you and that you as a girl can get things dome pretty darn quick.

Comming to the blog, I see toomuch of red, its just my opinion, and you can make use of loads of wdgets/gadgets that are availabe to make the blog more user friendly.

and you can even try out various templates that are availble, all these are just cosmetic changes so shoudt take long. And consider using line alignment.

I like your content, just keep posting regularly and have alook at my blog and have a go.

Cheers

Thanks a lot for sparing time to go thru my blog. I would definitely keep in mind your suggestions. I have already made some changes to it. You can have a glance at its fresh look :)

Thanks a lot for sparing time to go thru my blog. I would definitely keep in mind your suggestions.

Hii...i loved your blog...n will suggest just one things...

B urself n keep up the good work :)

Thanks a lot for the appreciation. I will try writing more such good stuffs which can keep you engaged in reading :)

Hi,

IndiRank 16! Congratulations!

I really liked the background. Your posts seem like slice-of-life musings, which are great. I especially liked the images you have selected for your posts. Good work.

Do find some time to connect with my blog as well!

Regards,

Rickie

Thanks a lot for going through my blog. Hope in future too, my posts can catch your eyes. I'll be very happy to read your blog. Keep writing. All the very best :)

Hi Ishita,

I like the content of your blog; its honest and straight from the heart...as someone mentioned earlier be yourself and write your heart out :)

The template of your blog is nice too but you could use many widgets to make the experience more enjoyable...

Keep writing girl !!

I'll surely look into utilizing the most of those widgets. Thanks for taking time out to read my blog. :)

I see talent in penning at it's ultimate. really great. design of bolg is also superb.number of posts is very less, like can be spruced up to many  more posts in a month.  though it's my problem too.

Hi Ishita, I'd gone through your blog, and this is what I can suggest. Beautiful blog name by the way.. Vibes.. sounds right! but why encrypt it with the ! and the $? :) 

I like the blog template structurally. It's simple and the sidebar is distinct from the post area (something I miss @ wordpress badly). The sidebar has some basic things like the connect widget and archive etc. But I can suggest these edits to the sidebar:

1. Reorder: Bring the connect and follow by email widgets to the top. When a blogger who comes from somewhere other than Indi, they won't be looking for the Indibadge, or looking to see if you are very popular with thousands of pageviews. They can take lesser priority. Then your profile, and the archive. The archive is at present a day based one.. As you post faster, that will take up more space than you or your reader would want. So you can make it the "hierarchical" one.
2. Remove: Some widgets I find are not very useful for me or for you. The "i power blogger" button, and the "G+1" button are something which can be slashed I think. To be very blunt, even the Indibadge isn't an absolute necessity, but some do like that on the blog, so I'd told that to be least priority! There is a widget with a FB this and Tweet This etc right below your blog name.. that's a put off. You can either shift it near the bottom of the sidebar or not have it at all I think. 
3. Add: Perhaps the "Top Posts" widget can be a useful addition to the blog. Or if you patiently do, a link list of the top 5 posts in your opinion. And the LinkWithin widget that can give some random posts from your blog at the end of each post. 
4. Restructure: Well, the structure u r using is the split right sidebar. I'd suggest you can shift to just the single sidebar option in your template design. 

I agree with Nabanita and others when they say your content brings out who YOU are, and that needs no change. I liked some posts like the dedication to your mother, and the dance post.. I found them to be beautiful. Since you are still early into blogging, I suggest you can label your previous posts properly and use the labels to your advantage for future too. Suppose someone wants to check all posts under a similar categorical umbrella, then the labels will definitely help that reader.

Perhaps a different background would be good too, the pink abstract background you are currently using isn't that attractive I feel. Some trial and error would get you a better appealing look for the space. I like that you are interacting with your readers by replying to their comments too. That'd definitely help make them feel welcome at your space. Good work!

Happy Blogging!

Leo has quite detailed what I wanted to say about your blog. Furthermore I'd like to commend you about the honesy in your writing. The content has a natural flow as it results from what you feel directly.

Mostly I like to comment about the blog presentation, I personally am fond of blogs which are simple, consistent and hed together. Having said that, you might want to ignore my comments if you do not consider these things of prime importance. The first three posts I saw, I could see the font variation, event Bold and Italics used many time. Such formatting options are only to insist on some words in the text and rarely a sentense, or show distinction between content. When you have entire blog post in italics it loses the reason for such formatting options. Also I found a lot of white space in the blog, if that is intensional then its okay, but otherwise you'd need to take care with paragraphing, as the text loses its link with previous paragraphs.

Again to highlight, I loved the purity of content, purity of expression, Channel this purity through the professional ways and you'd be a very successful blogger.

your blogs ia ll about the content 

keep up the great content u will rock

all the best for the contest

You have a good content. But look forward to optimize the look of your blog. 

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