Please Review my humour blog.Need to know whether I'm writing the right way...
I am relatively new to blogosphere and I want to know whether my blog is going at the right direction. For a blogger comments are gold, so feel free to comment if you do come across my site.
Reason: TItle change and obviously narcissism
I may not be the best person to comment on the content as I spent little time on your blog. The articles are long and chapters numbering make it appear even longer... Remember the reader is looking for instant gratification, you can hold his attention in the first para you have him.
Thanks for the review, I know my posts have been long, will try to cut down the words.
I would agree to what Lalit has mentioned above. Didn't read the blog in detail, but felt it is too long to capture the attention of casual visitors.
Thanks for teh comment. I agree the first post at present is really too long, it is a short story kind of a thing. I am relatively new here, will keep the posts shorter. Initially I thought long posts would keep the reader interested. Really sorry about the really long blogpost.
For people who feel my first post is long, (it is I know, just skip it and read the others, I suggest.
Hi, I guess I got carried away by the long post problem too. But that's minor, you have a really fundoo movie review blog also. WHY haven't you added that to your profile? And do write more often there also. I am so hooked to it now :-)
Hey TheAnalyst...I didint like it when u said sorry for teh long posts...Come on yaar..Its yobeur creation and you shouldnt be sorry about it but be PROUD about it despite the shortcomings..
Yes ushould take in the inputs and improve as we all aspitre too..We all are learning..Right? :)
.As i have put the comments alos on your blog post that i went through one of your post and it was damn good i say...Just the length ws a hindrance...
Keep them coming :)
Nice blog! My Compliments.... However, you're looking for more than the positive compliments, right? ;-). Here you go:
1. Your posts are sometimes long, but you already know that! :-).
2. Your english needs to be dumbed down. I know it is easy for you to dismiss this as a subjective opinion of someone who's basically dumb (which you'd be right to some extent), so I'd rely on http://simbon.madpage.com/Fog (you should too!). You score's way over there at 14.66. (trust me, not a great score :-(...). You may research on the Fog score more but in a nut-shell, it is the number of schooling years needed by a person before he can understand your english. Given our technology driven attention spans, the most intelligent ones amongst us are hovering around a comprehension level of 8-9 at most!
3. A blogs (definitely one that wants to be humorous and/or satirical) needs to score will on three counts if you ask me - originality, creativity, witty-flow. I'd give a low, medium, high score respectively. I am thinking you'll understand why.
4. Please do spare a thought on the layout. I find it a little too crammed but then this is definitely subjectively. Fonts are smallish but you'll have a challenge managing the length if you make it bigger. I know..
That is pretty much all. Trash the points if you find them worthless. And I do trust you to review (and hope you will!) my blog at http://blog.varunyagain.com
Many thanks and wishes,
http://www.indiblogger.in/forum/review.php?id=4178 is the link for my review request! :-)
Thanks for the review it was really thought provoking, about the template thing I know something has to be done, I am really procrastinating about it so much that I actually ended up blogging for that.
I agree with some1 whomentioned above that you shouldn't be apologising for your stye of work. What I read at your blog were definitely lengthy pieces but they weren't long drawn rantings for sure! You have picked up a subject and dutifully analysed every angle of it. It takes a lot of patience and thinking capacities to do that, I can imagine. Your blog will stand out for the content in the long run!
Now, thats my opinion. And definitely not an hyperbole! :)
However to keep some other readers who enjoy tidbits, you could ofcourse try your hand at quick jottings too...
You have a nice touch with satire. And the extent of vocab, flow - really good.
This is great. Since its just the beginning, you'll hone down with time, and you'll slowly fit the bill. Be patient. And keep writing. :)
And I must add, that is some really creative writing. Much better than I can ever get.. :P
Take care! Will keep visiting!
your blog is excellent too and your creativity is really good, suscribed to your feeds...
Well never say that, I've a lot to learn from you, did check out some of your older posts, class I must say... MOst of my posts are cliched compared to that...
Thanks really love it if someone from the same genre gives an opinion. Will keep blogging :)
Hey Buddy, dont worry about the length, I certainly like your style and my brief running through din't give me the impression that you are a drag. There sure are people in this world who are not-so-lazy and can read long posts and there are people lazy-enough to skip things like classes and focus on interesting stuff like blogs. So keep blogging aur apna style mat bigaad.
Been to your blog twice. The first time gaveup after starting to read a few lines, it was too long. Module name with '101' made me run away (i was fed with college course names). And again today looking for a new post, if any. read the 2nd post. It was good in way that it was short and talked straight to the point.
I am new to writing a blog. So the only suggestion I will give is that if you implement some of what others mentioned earlier soon it would be nice.
You are very creative, but you write for a niche audience. Your language is beautiful and flowering but at the same time it is a put off for the layman.