Please Review my humour blog.Need to know whether I'm writing the right way...

Lalit Singh Chowdhary
from Gurgaon
3 years ago

I may not be the best person to comment on the content as I spent little time on your blog. The articles are long and chapters numbering make it appear even longer... Remember the reader is looking for instant gratification, you can hold his attention in the first para you have him.

 

Keep blogging

Lalit

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks for the review, I know my posts have been long, will try to cut down the words.

Ramki
from Bangalore
3 years ago

I would agree to what Lalit has mentioned above.  Didn't read the blog in detail, but felt it is too long to capture the attention of casual visitors.

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks for teh comment. I agree the first post at present is really too long, it is a short story kind of a thing. I am relatively new here, will keep the posts shorter. Initially I thought long posts would keep the reader interested. Really sorry about the really long blogpost.

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

For people who feel my first post is long, (it is I know, just skip it and read the others, I suggest.

Poornima
from Bangalore
3 years ago

Hi, I guess I got carried away by the long post problem too. But that's minor, you have a really fundoo movie review blog also. WHY haven't you added that to your profile? And do write more often there also. I am so hooked to it now :-)

TheNish
from Noida
3 years ago

Hey TheAnalyst...I didint like it when u said sorry for teh long posts...Come on yaar..Its yobeur creation and you shouldnt be sorry about it but  be PROUD about it despite the shortcomings..

Yes ushould take in the inputs and improve as we all aspitre too..We all are learning..Right? :)

.As i have put the comments alos on your blog post that i went through one of your post and it was damn good i say...Just the length ws a hindrance...

Keep them coming :)

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks for the support guys, will keep blogging.

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Anymore reviews?

Varun Yagain
from Bangalore
3 years ago

Hello TheAnalyst!

Nice blog! My Compliments.... However, you're looking for more than the positive compliments, right? ;-). Here you go:

1. Your posts are sometimes long, but you already know that! :-).

2. Your english needs to be dumbed down. I know it is easy for you to dismiss this as a subjective opinion of someone who's basically dumb (which you'd be right to some extent), so I'd rely on http://simbon.madpage.com/Fog (you should too!). You score's way over there at 14.66. (trust me, not a great score :-(...). You may research on the Fog score more but in a nut-shell, it is the number of schooling years needed by a person before he can understand your english. Given our technology driven attention spans, the most intelligent ones amongst us are hovering around a comprehension level of 8-9 at most!

3. A blogs (definitely one that wants to be humorous and/or satirical) needs to score will on three counts if you ask me - originality, creativity, witty-flow. I'd give a low, medium, high score respectively. I am thinking you'll understand why.

4. Please do spare a thought on the layout. I find it a little too crammed but then this is definitely subjectively. Fonts are smallish but you'll have a challenge managing the length if you make it bigger. I know..

That is pretty much all. Trash the points if you find them worthless. And I do trust you to review (and hope you will!) my blog at http://blog.varunyagain.com

Many thanks and wishes,

Varun.

Varun Yagain
from Bangalore
3 years ago

http://www.indiblogger.in/forum/review.php?id=4178 is the link for my review request! :-)

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks for the review it was really thought provoking, about the template thing I know something has to be done, I am really procrastinating about it so much that I actually ended up blogging for that. 

Thanks anyway

Vibhuti Bhandarkar
from Pune
3 years ago

HI Analyst..

I agree with some1 whomentioned above that you shouldn't be apologising for your stye of work. What I read at your blog were definitely lengthy pieces but they weren't long drawn rantings for sure! You have picked up a subject and dutifully analysed every angle of it. It takes a lot of patience and thinking capacities to do that, I can imagine. Your blog will stand out for the content in the long run!

Now, thats my opinion. And definitely not an hyperbole! :)

However to keep some other readers who enjoy tidbits, you could ofcourse try your hand at quick jottings too...

Keep blogging...

Cheers..

Vibhuti

 

Deepti Richa
from Hyderabad
3 years ago

You have a nice touch with satire. And the extent of vocab, flow - really good.

This is great. Since its just the beginning, you'll hone down with time, and you'll slowly fit the bill. Be patient. And keep writing. :)

Cheers!

Deepti Richa
from Hyderabad
3 years ago

And I must add, that is some really creative writing. Much better than I can ever get.. :P

Take care! Will keep visiting!

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

your blog is excellent too and  your creativity is really good, suscribed to your feeds...

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Well never say that, I've a lot to learn from you, did check out some of your older posts, class I must say... MOst of my posts are cliched compared to that...

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks really love it if someone from the same genre gives an opinion. Will keep blogging :)

 

Ramchandra Upadhya
from Mumbai
3 years ago

Lets start with the superficial things first. The template. I have the same, but on your blog it looks a bit cluttered with all those widgets(No i ain't saying it cause i want to be the only one with the template :)). I suggest, since you already have the feedburner widget on top showing all the recent posts, remove the one on the side bar. I'd like to see the about me widget above, subscribe below. If you really wanna keep all those widgets, I suggest search for a 3 column theme. The content. I loved. I haven't read all your posts, only the first one till now, they are quite long, and might put off the casual visitors, but am sure the content is good, at least Procrastination was. Will read all the others soon. So for now, I'd say its a good blog, only the template thingi is where I think you could improve. Keep blogging :)

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks for the review, yes will change the template soon:)

Rawjeev
from Bengaluru
3 years ago

Hey Buddy, dont worry about the length, I certainly like your style and my brief running through din't give me the impression that you are a drag. There sure are people in this world who are not-so-lazy and can read long posts and there are people lazy-enough to skip things like classes and focus on interesting stuff like blogs. So keep blogging aur apna style mat bigaad.

theanalyst
from Calicut
3 years ago

Thanks for the opinion...do visit my blog more often

G Naresh Babu
from Bangalore
3 years ago

Hey,

Been to your blog twice. The first time gaveup after starting to read a few lines, it was too long. Module name with '101' made me run away (i was fed with college course names). And again today looking for a new post, if any. read the 2nd post. It was good in way that it was short and talked straight to the point.

I am new to writing a blog. So the only suggestion I will give is that if you implement some of what others mentioned earlier soon it would be nice.

Naresh/Apradhi

 

Prateek Shujanya
from Dehradun
3 years ago

You are very creative, but you write for a niche audience. Your language is beautiful and flowering but at the same time it is a put off for the layman.