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[ http://laxmitodiwan.blogspot.com ] IndiRank: 29

Please review my blog.

Laxmi Todiwan
Laxmi Todiwan
from Navi Mumbai
12 years ago

Hi!

       I am new to blogging. Haven't posted much. Will appreciate if you could kindly go through my blog and give your feedback.

Thanks and Regards

Laxmi.

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Purnendu
Purnendu
from Pune
12 years ago

Hi Laxmi, 

Here is the review:

Content: Good, language fluid and interesting (although Housekeeping is not my core competency but was able to read with interest). You rite very well and the momentum needs to be kept up. However some pictures/ illustrations will make it much better.

Look and Feel:

The over all look and feel is good but I have some suggestions. 

1. Illustrations 

2. The font is not uniform and thats because you compose your post on a Word Doc and then paste it here. You have also copied from an HTML file. My suggestion is to transfer the composed doc to notepad first and then copy in the blog to remove any source formating. 

3. The length of blog is 7 posts a page which is a bit long. Can you shorten it to 5 ?

4. You need not post full blog in the home page, why not post the excerpts only and have a "Read More" Link? 

5. A presence on Twitter and FB will be an added bonus. 

 

So this was it! Overall a nice blog :) You get a 7/10 from me, please work on the Look and Feel and that will make your blog even better :)

Laxmi Todiwan
Laxmi Todiwan
from Navi Mumbai
12 years ago

 Purdendu,

                    This really is a detailed one. As I said I am new here and need to learn a lot. Will certainly inplement on your suggestions. Will take a while I guess as I haven't really figured out how things work.

Thanks,

Warm Regards

Laxmi.