Neetha would like you to review his/her blog.
[ http://www.neetzworld.blogspot.com/. ]

looking for your valuable suggestions..a confused blogger :)

Neetha
Neetha
from Kerala
12 years ago

hi all....

this is my blog 'alter ego'..pls read and review..:)

waiting for your valuable feedback..i need to improve a lot...

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Purnendu
Purnendu
from Pune
12 years ago

    Is it because change scares me as nothing else would  or
    Is it because I am too much in love with myself…

Whoa ! This was something !

Going through your blog and posting my comments here :

1. Look and Feel: Neat, Calming and beautiful. It really sets the mood. 

2. Language: Flawless. Makes you stop and take notice. Beautiful prose ! 

" Love me no more"
     "I am not just me..

3. Frequency: Reallu good. Keep posting. 

 

Overall you have a beautiful blog with some very beautiful posts. I loved going through it and have actually joined it. In terms of improvement, maybe you can limit it to 5 posts per page.

 

8.5/10 :)

Neetha
Neetha
from Kerala
12 years ago

Hi Purnendu….

You made my day :)

 thanks a lot for the wonderful review…frank, inspiring n constructive . 

I have been a lazy blogger so far:(

 I am so glad you joined my blog coz u r an excellent critic n the presence of such a personality would help me to be more serious about what I write :)

 

 

 

Purnendu
Purnendu
from Pune
12 years ago

The pleasure is mine :)

Leo
Leo
from Bengaluru
12 years ago

A quite wonderful poet you are! I agree with Purnendu that the design is simple and calming, and your English is quite good too... I don't know if its flawless or not, coz my thoughts always that we improve each day and we're neither flawed or perfect. Personal philosophy of course :)

 

I loved your poem, "Catharsis". That was one of the best I've read recently. A critique I can give is, if you're using big images, keep the image and the poem both centre aligned, so the flow isn't interrupted by the image ending. And maybe add labels to your posts, so your readers can know more of what it is about! Some hints, not full details of course! :D

 

Cheers!

Neetha
Neetha
from Kerala
12 years ago

Hi Vinay,

Thanks a lot. I am so happy that you cared to go through my drowsy blog :)

 I agree wth you personal philosophy:)

perfectly imperfect or imperfectly perfect !! who knows..:))

Thanks for the suggestions.Will definitely think about that. n about the labels...hmmm..actually i found it difficult to label my thoughts..that's why i didnt label them so far..:) wanted to maintain some sort of ambiguity !!! n once again thanks a lot for being a part of My Alter Ego:)...

Neetha
Neetha
from Kerala
12 years ago

in btwn...good to know that you rhyme without reason :)!!Laughing

your blog is really wonderful !! jus started the journey across 'I Rhyme Without Reason'Laughing

loving it:) keep writing

Leo
Leo
from Bengaluru
12 years ago

welcome.. a pleasure to  have u at my space Neetha. Smile eppo venankilum varam. orangipokalle ente poetry vayichu.. Tongue out

Neetha
Neetha
from Kerala
12 years ago

Surprised..dt ws a surprise !!!

poetry vayichu urangipokilla..:) kaaranam ellaam nannayittund..vaayichu theerthilla enkilum Smile

nandiLaughing

Leo
from Bengaluru
12 years ago

what surprise? Tongue out thanks Neetha... glad you liked it. urs is too.. have followed it...Smile