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Please Review My Poetry Blog!

Nirati
Nirati
from Mumbai
9 years ago

Teenage Babblings is my secondary blog, it is where I publish the poetry that I write. 

I'd really be grateful if you review it and tell me what changes need to be made, if any. :)

I recently checked & stats are low as hell. I would love your input/suggestions :)x 

Edited 9 years ago
Reason: I needed to add 2 lines!
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Nikhil Poddar
Nikhil Poddar
from Kolkata
9 years ago

Your blog is good. Just make sure you remove the vast empty space on the top.

On your poems, they are nicely written. If I could give you a tip - a poem is always better if it is in a straigh line like this ( the * means content) - 

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You see, all lines take the same amount of space. This makes your poem neater.

www.thenikiller.blogspot.com

Nirati
Nirati
from Mumbai
9 years ago

Oh oh okay, allright. Thank you soo much :)