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Ashok Vaishnav
Ashok Vaishnav
from Ahmedabad
9 years ago

The blog contains my own 'personal' views or add-on comments on what I currently read - mainly relating to blogs or soft articles from internet on contemporary management, non-fiction prose- or on other inputs on my other hobbies, viz. listening to pre-1970 Hindi Film music and ghazals.

I look forward to suggestions for better formatting - to the extent the standard designs would permit - of the blog.

 

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Micky Fernandez
Micky Fernandez
from Kolkata
8 years ago

I think that you are a good speller, but you need to be consistently good.

Also, I do not understand the grammar of this phrase: ‘infatuated wish to see his below any writing’. (From your 10 March post)

I do not know the formatting features of wordpress--I barely know those of blogger--but if you are going to have a tab bar (where you now have "Home" and "About this Blog"), then you may want to have more categories there; it seems empty having just two.

Ashok Vaishnav
from Ahmedabad
8 years ago

I greatly appreciate your feedback.

I have noted the need for consistancy in maintaining correct spellings. I need to be a better editor of what I write. I know I am not good at that, but the point is well taken for taking up the improvement.

You were also right about that sentence in my post of 10th March,2012. I have now corrected it in this manner: His literary urge itched him when he was 10, and he was ‘infatuated with a wish to see his name below any writing’.

Many thnaks , once again,