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[ http://unfurledlife.blogspot.in/ ] IndiRank: 25

Looking for a feedback on my new blog and wish to be guided

Mischief Manager
Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

My blog is about random daily things that sometimes leave deep impressions in the memory. 

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Gopan Kombiyil
Gopan Kombiyil
from Cambridge, UK
7 years ago

I liked the blog on the first view. you have variety content, still  you may consider the following 

Te formatting of the text is not the best, may be you can use the <read more> function instead of posting entire article on the home page.

you can try increasing the text size a bit too. 

The images should not loose the aspect ratio 

these minor changes should be helping the blog a bit.

 

keep blogging

 

 

 

Mischief Manager
Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

@goapl, thanks a ton. But how do I implement the READ MORE function??And yeah i am trying for the font, but there are very limited fonts in blogger :( 

Gopan Kombiyil
Gopan Kombiyil
from Cambridge, UK
7 years ago

you have jump break to add the read more, and formatting depends on the template, try formatting the text outside blogger and paste it. 

Mischief Manager
Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

JUMP BREAK??? yeah the next post will surely be formatted =))

Mischief Manager
Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

yeah got it. I made a few changes. Have a look, and advice =). Thank you

Gopan Kombiyil
Gopan Kombiyil
from Cambridge, UK
7 years ago

i think u can use READ MORE much before it is used now, it looks much better, still i am not convinced with the font and text justification. try different options and check it yourself , don't worry you are in the right direction, bit more efforts will take you to the destination.

Mischief Manager
Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

aye aye captain. Should I edit the posts or bring in the editing of the texts and all from the next post?

Mischief Manager
Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

hey RickieI did start a blog about two year back. but it did not materialize into anything.  So I gave up on that. And now since I have the time for a blog. i decided to give it a one more try :)Thank you for the review. I shall definietely have a look at your blog :) 

Nabanita Dhar
Nabanita Dhar
from Bangalore
7 years ago

Hi Harshal...I like the way you write ... Content wise I think you are doing great...Just a suggestion the background is too dark, perhaps you could make it little lighter so that it would be pleasant for the eyes to look at... Keep writing !!! 

Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

thanks a lot di for your review Smile. By backgroud, You mean I should change my template and all???

Tanzimha
Tanzimha
from Guwahati
7 years ago

Your writing are good. Read 'the boarding lounge !!'. It was a good piece of writing, but to be very honest found it a bit dramaticTongue out. Everyone has suggested about your theme, but I am assuming that you've changed it coz I liked the theme. Keep blogging..

Mischief Manager
from Gandhinagar
7 years ago

Dramatic as in?? Yeah, I changed it recently, hoping to keep this one for a long time. Thanks a lot for visiting. :)