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Please review my poetry blog

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Aditya Sen
from NEW DELHI |

well...i am blogging....i just don't know how i'm doing. would love feedback. 

thanx

adisaurajsen. 

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Leo
from Bengaluru |
  • Very colorful background you have. It's attractive in one way, but hindering in another. The grey font on the transparent background brings less effect. Makes one have to squint to see, if you follow what I mean :)
  • I've not been one for long line poetry, it gives a feeling of prose, even with a rhyme; if you're reading it out loud, it doesn't flow as well. I like what I'm reading and you definitely have a way with words, I suggest a trial at shorter line poetry too, coz you do have the rhyme sense.
  • Having started out poetry recently, I think its safe to assume you're looking for readers to follow you, and not show them how many visitors have come by till then :) the followers widget needs to shift to the topmost, then your archive. If possible, you can also label your posts, and add a label cloud after the archive widget, so people can browse by categories.

Peace! Happy blogging.