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Sameer Kulkarni
from Pune |

Hello friends,

Please review my blog and post your reviews/ suggestions.

These are fictional short stories with one thing in common-- a twist in the end.

Hope you like them.

Thank you.

Cheers,

Sameer

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Shivprasad Murkibhavi
from Belgaum |

hey hi sameer.

Well had been through your blogs and it was nice to knwo about your short stories.

I would suggest you to break it into parts. as such it would be hard for a reader to read it in a go. Make it into different episodes, as i felt it was too long in one single writeup.

I hope i was not harsh.

When you are writing a story, jsut keep in mind, about the POV, settings, Mechanism, Characters, Description of the character and scenarios, expression of emotion and always holding up reader till the end.

Happy blogging and have  a great day ahead.

Thanks & Regards,

Shiv

Sameer Kulkarni
from Pune |

Hey Shiv,

Many thanks for reading my posts and for the feedback. I shall certainly keep your suggestions in mind.

Thanks again.

Cheers,

Sameer