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Jacqueline
from Bangalore |

Looking for honest reviews of my blog..

I write on a number of topics, but my interest lies in short stories, animals and nature.

Feel free to pour in your suggestions, feedback or ideas that would help me to improve my blog.

Link: http://lamozabonita.wordpress.com/

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Jacqueline
from Bangalore |

 Anyone? Would also like to know more about how MozRank works

Fatima
from Mumbai |

Hey,

I liked you blog, there is a calm and serenity that I found there. The posts are good and even the presentation makes you feel good :)

And yes I love the way you write, too lengthy but still fine !

Shivprasad Murkibhavi
from Belgaum |

hi,

Nice to know about you and your blogs.

Your short stories are good. Also it would be better if you split larger para in to smaller ones.

You can also add the background scenario of where the action is being taken place. 

your POV, is of from a girl's prespective, as such which you know better, you can also write stories based on 2nd POV or a guys POV.

This what i felt in intial 2 blogs which i read.

No matter if i was harsh, take only those which you feel are right and rest discard.

Will be valuable, if you give a feedback on my blogs too..

Happy writing

Regards,

Shiv

Jacqueline
from Bangalore |

Thank you Fatima and Shiv, would remember your feedback for my future posts.