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Scribbler
from Bangalore |
Read no further, 
I wish you don’t,
You already read the title;
It’s just an experiment,
With some words woven together
And not many metaphors to accompany,
Just shaken, stirred, sampled and put to the litmus test;

Hope you aren’t still reading,
It’s not worth moving a line ahead.
If to kill time is why you’re here,
Turn around and leave or you might regret.
You have a couple more options to contemplate,
Than slay this moment mercilessly by gawking at this page.

STOP! Proceed no further.
You might find no meter or rhyme,
I don’t follow that habitually.
Twists and turns aren’t obvious, not necessarily in every scribble.
Some call it poetry and others free verse;
I still prefer calling it scribbles, please don’t misread me.

You’ve come this far patiently, I insist you retreat.
Perhaps, you don’t pay heed to caution
And make decisions on your own.
So you’ve opted to read the conclusion,
And kill the curiosity before it kills the curious.
‘Reverse psychology works even in a scribble’,
Now, that’s my experiment’s conclusion.
What’s your opinion?
- Scribbler
scribblezpad.blogspot.com 

Hmmm! Now that i have your attention, this is Scribbler here. 
And here's my first post on the forum.
Feel free to comment. Do add in your work / link too.
Would love to read em. Cheers!!

keep it rollin;) 
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Reason: Formatting again

Replies 1 to 15 of 15

Ravi Lobo
from Wisconsin |

Interesting post!

sm
from india |

lol

sriharsha

Scribbler
from Bangalore |

Thank you people for your comments :)

@ Sriharsha: As you wish;) 

Scribbler
from Bangalore |

Thank you Subhayan, Parth and Arjuna :)

IMpressive work on your blog. Will be back for more.

keep it rollin;)

kinnos
from Bhubaneswar |

when someone asks you to not to do something you do thatWink that's human natureTongue outso I read your whole post though you have posted those don't proceed warnings so many timesEmbarassed nice one scribblerLaughing

http://www.iluvmyfamily.co.cc/blog/

Scribbler
from Bangalore |

Thank you Anand Ravichandran

Quite an interesting and informative blog.

And thank you Kunu

Liked your blog a lot. Very insightful posts.

keep it rollin;)

Scribbler
from Bangalore |

Thank you Kunu

keep it rollin;)

Sanjay Vedula
from Hyderabad |

Good one! Added you to my network!

Anoop Zombie
from Bangalore |

scribbler :- quick question did you read your post after you read it? Laughing

Anoop Zombie
from Bangalore |

Scribbler :- I meant .. did you read your post after you wrote it Laughing

Scribbler
from Bangalore |

Thanks Sanjay

and Anoop: Not really ;)

Scribbler
from Bangalore |

Thank you for the comments Sriharsha

Well, I liked your post on Inner Peace.

I've added it on the 'Recommend a blog' Thread.

Do check it out. And post your fav blog.

keep it rollin;)