my blog consists mostly of poems, in either hindi or english. i am new at short stories and my recent post is a short story based on a true event.the accident described is true, one can find its details on wikipaedia. rest of the posts are poems. all have my true feelings. i have wrote them first in my diary. later they became my blog's first posts. please give me a revew about it. about the content, writing skills and grammer mistakes, as i m not that good with this forign language
Reason: last one was too long to see