Element
from Delhi |
Hi Friend,
May we have a walk together as I wish to listen from you about what I have penned down here.
Cheers,
-Element
Let's have a walk together...
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Lalit Singh Chowdhary
from Gurgaon |
Honestly I found it very boring. I think you pour your day's exhaustion into your writing. Try writing in the morning.
Maybe it is just that I do not appreciate poetic or lyrical writing. I apologize if my comment were harsh.
Cheers
Lalit
Hemal Shah
from Mumbai |
Your posts are like started to stop. Try to complete your story.
Story Frame isnt properly executed, you should put some more thoughts on this.
Liked the images used, nice. Overall template is good, but can be more refined.
Try a bit hard and you should get that.
Cheers!