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Roohani Deshpande

from New Delhi | 23 Sep 2009

Hi All,

I'm a 16 year old girl from India who writes about life experiences, articles about opinionated topics like existence of god or choosing a career stream, and basic teenage issues. I have been writing since around 10 months now, and would like a review of my work until now just to see how I'm doing.

There is a tab called "Feedback" on my blog, whcih is a page meant for anyone who would like to give suggestions regarding the blog. I would appreciate it very much if I could get a feedback on my articles, either here on on my blog. Looking forward to it! :)

Roohani Deshpande

http://roohani.wordpress.com

Edited 7 Nov 2009
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Lalit Singh Chowdhary

from Gurgaon | 24 Sep 2009

Dear Roohani

Your blog is wonderful, especially the Humour section. You should make your blog interactive so that your friends can leave comments.

A friend of mine made a blog for his daughter interactive by asking people to leave three words and she now writes short stories. I think it is a very cool idea (http://threewordstories.blogspot.com/). You can perhaps think on those lines.

Sorry did not read your article on existence on God because I am more opinionated than you :)

Keep writing

Cheers

Lalit

pundit

from Oslo | 24 Sep 2009

I think your blog is very pretty. I love the visual style (cute colours) as well as the style of your writing (upbeat), and it fits well with the thoughts you're trying to express.In terms of improvement, I think it would be nicer still if the links on top (to home, about, etc.) were working.

Roohani Deshpande

from New Delhi | 14 Oct 2009

Thanks a lot, I've implemented most of ur suggestions on my blog :)

from india | 24 Sep 2009

wonderful blog

nice template

narration is good .

http://realityviews.blogspot.com/

Roohani Deshpande

from New Delhi | 24 Sep 2009

@Lalit: Thanks a lot, I'll try to make my blog more interactive :)

@Sunil: Thanks, I'll post more frequently

@Pundit n Sm: Thank u both so much :-D

Naveen kumar

from chandigarh | 25 Sep 2009

add some links in the " home" "about" options n post more often

rest is all awesome

beautiful blog template , nice widgets

http://cerebrationlog.blogspot.com/

Roohani Deshpande

from New Delhi | 25 Sep 2009

Thanks Naveen,

The problem is that I don't knw how to link those tabs through html coding, lol, or I would have done so. P.S. Your blog is awesome too! Loved the 'philosopher' tagline :)

Pushkaraj Apte

from Pune | 1 Oct 2009

First of all, congrats for starting off on wordpress instead of blogspot! I have been harbouring the migration from b to w for ages, still don't have the heart to do it.

As for your blog, all I can say is - I don't believe you are just 16 !!!! Such mature writing......

Writers of the world, please look at this girl's writing - and learn from her!

Great job, Roohani. keep it up. I will follow your blog regularly, for sure.

Regards,

Pushkaraj Apte

http://www.express-explore.blogspot.com

Roohani Deshpande

from New Delhi | 1 Oct 2009

Thank you so much Pushkaraj!

And I moved to wordpress just a couple of days back, I had been at blogger for almost a year before I finally decided to switch. :)

Your blog is great! The "Cutting Costs" post invokes thought, for example. Happy blogging :)