Ojasi Robin
from Banswara |
Hi this is Ojasi mehta from Jaipur. I am a student of literature and I had started blogging few months back. I want to get a review of my blog so that I can improve more and get to know where I lack.
Please review my personal blog
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Lalit Singh Chowdhary
from Gurgaon |
I think you are using blog as a hankie. If you used it as a curtain, open it to get the sunshine in and close it when there is storm, you will feel lot better off. There are only but a few people who would like to read from wrinkled, tearful sheet!!
Your poetry Sand and Wrestling with my Soul are wonderful. You need to distance yourself from your art, that will make it mystical and soul touching.
One suggestion please use Devanagari when you write in Hindi (Google provides help in converting your existing work too). It is much easier to read and your audience will cherish it.
Write something cheerful as well.
Lalit
Ojasi Robin
from Banswara |
You explained the weakness of my writing very well through the similes of hankies and curtains :)
Yes , I agree I write more about dullness and depression while there should be balance or growth from darkness to light. I hope I understood actual meaning of your review.
Thank you very much for your precious guidance !
Take care.
echelon
from Delhi |
i think i will agree with Lalit Singh Chowdhary. Your blog after 6 years still feels like Hankie.Please work on Template and overall
look and navigation aspects.
Anyways you have great content.