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Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi All,

Recently, I just discovered the charm of poerty in hindi. I just want to share my expression and thinking with you all. In addition, I would be love to get connected with people who write poerty or take deep interest in poetry.

Look ahead for a fruitful association with poetry lovers!

Thanks,

Rachana

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Rajnish Kumar
from Bangalore |

I have tons of poetry in Urdu and Hindi.have attempted some translations too.

For my own writings Pls check http://aahang.wordpress.com/category/by-aahang/

Let me know your feedback.

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi Rajnish,

Thanx for your impormptu response.

I have checked your blog and your poems are refreshing.

Please visit my blog http://rachana-myopenspace.blogspot.com/ and let me know your feedback and suggetsions for improvement.

Thanks,

Rachana

Rajnish Kumar
from Bangalore |

i read your poems I liked the one below.I feel you should give more thought on expression than the rhyming.Sometimes it takes the essence away.For beginners like us it s agood effort.

Rang: Mere aur Tumhare
Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Thanks Rajnish for your valauble feedback. I will try to put more efforts on expression on thoughts.

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi Khushi,

Your poems are evry meaningful and nicely written.

Please stop by my blog, read my lines and leave your feedback.

Thanks,

Rachana

Sriharsha
from Bangalore |

I'm not totally at wrong place. I write poetry in Telugu Cool 

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi Sriharsha,

oops! I can't read Teluga but would to hear the hidden meaning of your poems either in hindi or english...

Thanks,

Rachana

suvro
from Bangalore |

I write in bengali.

But can check some of my short english poems @ http://suvrocomposition.blogspot.com/

Let me know if you write too.

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi Shas,

Thanx for reading my work and appreciating them.

Even, I have started writing only 15 days back, but I know I have found a way to say out loud.

My best wishes to the poet in you.

Regards,

Rachana Laughing

Shas
from Delhi |

Thanks Rachana.

Wish you the same.

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

Hi rachana,

Indeed some good writings , I like the way you think and theres immense potential to improve ... but it would only come with more and more writing ... so keep doing it ...

And do visit my blog too ... even I write poems and some short stories too ... You'll have to go back some posts to see the poems though ... Its been a while I wrote the last one .... But I hope my other posts will also keep you hooked ...

Regards,

Sunny

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi Sunny,

Thanx for your comments. I have read your poems, they are very meaningful.

Regards,

Rachana

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

That was fast ... 15 mins flat ...

good ...

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

BTW ... which ones did u like ?

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Laughing..I like reading poetry..can't resist..that's y...

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

would like to have some of your comments on my post ... I hope you dont mind ....

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

chale the...i will read that one also...delhi...delhites r not that bad...Laughing

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

Please read Aye Khuda ... I tried it at a different level ... please do read ....

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

sure...i will...i would expect same from u...comments on my blog...

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

This is fast ... any faster and this would be yahoo chat ... lol ... that brings me to another question ... Can we like be in touch thru actual chat ... coz we r like talkin really like chatting ... I dont knw if I should be asking this ... but couldn't resist ...  I  hope you wont mind ...

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

nice poem.. aye khuda...kavi ki koti kalpana...Laughing

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

Thanks ... I dont really understand what 'koti' means ... Can you please tell me ?

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

sure...I really like your poems...very nice indeed...u can guide me coz I have just started writing...what shud I do to write better?

Sunny Thakkar
from Nagpur |

My Yahoo Id is   thakkar_sunny ... I hope we can get in touch there sometime ... And as far as writing well is concerned ... poems are really what we think ... whats on our mind ... I always prefer to think of a situation before writing ... and then put ourselves there and write what comes to the mind ... rhyming always comes at a later stage ...

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

oh sorry..it was kori means plain or neat....u have written beautifully...good

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

You know what, I think the central theme before writing anything..for example, while having a conversation with a friend I answered "kya likhu?" This word striked me and I wrote a poem. But I will try to think your way, a complete situation before writing. Thanx

Neeraj Gupta
from delhi->Bangalore |

Hey Rachana,

Neeraj Gupta
from delhi->Bangalore |

Hey Rachana,

  You write nice poems.... Check out mine @http://Harikripahai.blogspot.com

Neeraj

Rachana Agarwal
from Noida |

Hi Neeraj,

Thank you very much for appreciating my work. Checked ur blog, why don't u write often...keep writing...all the best...thanks,

Rachana