1. good template, but since this is more like a portfolio do look at some portfolio blogs. they help you emphasis on your work. Mine is a folio blog.
2. cant find contact me. Write a post on about me and link it to the top menu.
3. what is EDIT on top menu
4. social book marking on all posts?
5. What is SAMPLE TEXT?
6. Avoid Capitals for the blog title. Its an indication of shouting; and attention grabing
6. go low on widgets
7. Pull down the post with a line break in the code. its right below the text with post information.
8. the bar at the bottom is weirdly placed and will miss the attention.
9. Copy right info should come down below the website in a single line. Avoid putting it as a sidebar element.
Hope it helps!
Vinni
PS: If you found value with my above review, do visit my blog http://vinni.co.in and leave a comment and connect with me by adding me on the indiblogger network.