Borna
from Madison |
I am an aspiring poet. want to be published someday, so I want to know if my poetry is good enough
Please review my poetry blog
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umashankar pandey
from Bhopal |
Borna, I loved the "Peas". Longer poems loose my interest unless, of course, they are very compelling.
Your template personifies turbulence. I've a neutral stand to that but it makes for difficult reading. You may consider a different theme.