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PULKIT
from NOIDA |

some words that just came out from my pen... in a sudden burst of dusk about what I saw in my dream the previous night... !! not sure if its a poem or not... do let me know how you find it, hope u will like this post and my blog too! may god bless all...

http://19goes20.blogspot.com/2009/03/dreaming-attrocious-atonement.html

thats the link to the post!

thanks !!

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Hemal Shah
from Mumbai |

Nice Peom Pulkit.

My suggestion, feel free to discard it.

I am not at all perfect in writing myself, but here is something that I feel. You needed that little contiuation in your poem. though you have used langs correctly, there is a break that does not encourage a  reader to go deep.

A poem should always take the user deep within...

PULKIT
from NOIDA |

@ hemal shah - thanks for the reply sir!

@ kadambari - thanks for the motivation dear!

PRABHJOT
from New Delhi |

I like the words come from your pen...

Keep blogging. :)

PULKIT
from NOIDA |

thanks a lot prabhjot! :) ur a follower at my blog bro... but u seldom visit it dear..!!

anyways... thanks for the visit and glad that u liked work :)

god bless!

PULKIT
from NOIDA |

thanks a lot khushi for the worthy advice.. m working on a poem again... will try to do better this time! hope that I satisfy u more next time :)

thanks dear!