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Kalyan Mukherjee
from Mumbai |

It was just recently I was toying with the idea of writing hindi poetry. What I really felt that hindi poetry recently had a lot of content but then somewhere has lost the innocence and rhyme. 

All I am trying to do is bring a bit of innocence and rhyme in hindi poetry by writing this blog. 

Looking forward for your responses. 

Thanks,

Kalyan

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Sanjay Vedula
from Hyderabad |

hey Kalyan

Been at your blog.  Wow dude! You write pretty well. Jab maine tumse pyaar kiya is lovely. I wonder how can you write such poems. 

Can't think of any suggestions. Just had to keep admiring the poems that's it.

Keep posting!

Cheers!

Kalyan Mukherjee
from Mumbai |

Hi Sanjay thank you first of all for liking my blog. Actually poetry, music and art were something that I always wanted to do. But it is the rat-race that brought me into Telecom. By doing this probably I am trying to resurrect some of myself which had been burried for long.

Kalyan Mukherjee
from Mumbai |

Hi Sanjay thank you first of all for liking my blog. Actually poetry, music and art were something that I always wanted to do. But it is the rat-race that brought me into Telecom. By doing this probably I am trying to resurrect some of myself which had been burried for long. 

Hi Vanathi, I agree they are kinda filmy....Actually not very professional in writing but then trying to be rhymie I guess.