Gangadhar Divatar
from Belgaum |
I would like hear a review, which reflects my errors in the form of writing style, elaboration of the topic, utilisation of the word power etc. It will e surely helpfull to improve a step ahed in future
-Gangadhar
Please Review my Blog of poetry and a short story in kannada
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prashant
from hyderabad |
Hi Gangadhar
unfortunately, do not know Kannada, so unable to review it.
Can say that the lay out is good, but could be more better, if the blogs are divided into smaller paragrapahs
warm regards
prashantn
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