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My blog is bad, really bad. I really need some help from the critics to just give my blog as much bashing as possible, but constructive criticism please. I started blogging a few years ago and then stopped, still don't know the reason. Now I'm back again but I've lost the readership I gained.
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hey,
I read a few random stories in your blog.I liked them but I have a few pointers if you don't mind:
1) you can try experimenting with the narrative style. The narrator who knows everything in the plot and also narrates everything he/she knows gets a bit monotonous.
multiple narrators, and first person limited narrator etc. might be exciting to try out.
2)add more adjectives. That makes the language more visual.
3) Explaining everything kills the mystery and makes things predictible. make people want to read the next line. SURPRISE people.
keep writing and I am sure u'll gain the readership back.
Do check my blog and review it if you can.