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Niranjana.S
from chennai |

hello fellow bloggers :)

i've just started blooging for some two months. and i'm loving it. :) 

i've just joined indiblogger and i've seen some really good blogs. i would like to improve mine too. so i ask you guys to check it out and give me a feedback on where i can improve and what is good in my blog. 

guys i need some of your critical feedback.

cheers,

niranjana :)

my blog : http://civilprincess.blogspot.com

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Dhanesh Gandhi
from Mumbai |

Hello Niranjana,

                            I read 7-8 of your posts and i have the following comments to add.

1. The theme is good but you need to work around the positions, for example the clock and the calendar might look fancy, but why have it as a header?

2. Your blog is more picture/information oriented. What i mean is try to add more to your words and insert hyperlinks if the content is big. Be more decisive in that respect.

Say you want us to share about the technicalities about a complex structure and it is important for us to understand the basic facts about it, give us a link. Instead if you provide more and more statistics which are already available on the link , it occupies a lot of your blog. In the end your content becomes less and the info becomes more.

3. Again align the pictures and preview before publishing as the arrangement of pictures i find a bit disorderly. Apart from the twins blog i couldn't read much of what you had to write.

Keep writing Smile

Niranjana.S
from chennai |

thanks dhanesh for the suggestion :)

1. i have changed my theme, positions of the widgets and I've removed the clock.

2. yeah you are right my blog is more of picture oriented. and i'll make sure my next subject oriented posts will have such hyperlinks. :)

3. i'll check out the alignment problem. :)

anyway thanks for your review. i'm already doing the necessary changes. do check out my blog and point out if it needs any further changes Smile

cheers! 

niranjanaSmile

http://civilprincess.blogspot.com/

rajuda
from Mumbai |

Hi Niranjana

Liked your blog.  A few changes here and there, and it should look even better.

Taje off that 'civil princess' image banners.  They are interruptions to the eye.

You have too many links on either sides of your post.  What extra benefits do they give?  Knock off a few.  With so many distractions crowding around, your post has a 'submerged look'.  A first time visitor is lost in the maze of links and summaries.

You have a spontaneous style of writing... easy to read and understand.  Make those few changes and your blog will be a treat to the eyes.

Please drop in at my blog.  Tell me what you feel

Rajuda

http://blog.teega.com/

Niranjana.S
from chennai |

thanks rajuda :)

i have changed the whole appearance of my blog and given it a two column format. please check it out and tell me if it needs any further changes :)

i just checked your blog. it's a nice one you've got. i liked the theme it's simple and nice. :) i have just seen one article. will go through the rest later.

thanks for reviewing my blog Smile

cheers!

niranjana :)

http://civilprincess.blogspot.com/

Zaira Hakeemshah
from Chennai |

Simple blog..I do not have to break my head to understand what exactly are they trying to say..Neat personal blog you have there,so full of your love and likings..Keep blogging dear!!.. And my observations are no different from Rajuda's..Just follow what she had to say..

Also visit me @ http://zradar.wordpress.com and let me know your thoughts

Niranjana.S
from chennai |

thanks zaira :) 

i've made some changes accordingly. :)

checked your blog too. i loved the header. it's so nice.

thanks for reviewing my blog. :)

cheers!

niranjana :)

http://civilprincess.blogspot.com/

rajuda
from Mumbai |

Hi Niranjana

What a change!  Your blog looks inviting now. 

But Niranjana, let it not have a totally 'white-washed' look.  A dash of colour here and there would make it even more attractive.  Hope you get me.

Happy blogging

Rajuda

Niranjana.S
from chennai |

hello indibloggers Smile

i've made a new header for my blog. i have done a doodle for the words "CIVIL" and put in some pictures and done a header. 

I've used simple softwares like power point and paint only. so it may not be that great. but still i will be happy if you guys would look at it and voice your opinion Laughing

cheers!

niranjana Smile

http://civilprincess.blogspot.com/