Caterpillar
from Bangalore |
Hi,
I'd like someone to review and provideme constructive criticism on what's good and what I need to improve on... thanks in advance.
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Suchismita
from Pune |
Hi,
Visited your blog before you requested a review. You reflect a lot of your positive thoughts on the blog which is a nice 'pick me up' read. If we are nit picking, I suppose I could say that your posts are long because when you give bullet items, you frame a whole sentence.. for example, in your recent post on what you love about the man in your life, you start each point with 'I love..... ' which can be redundant. Happy blogging! :)
Suchismita
from Pune |
Hi,
Visited your blog before you requested a review. You reflect a lot of your positive thoughts on the blog which is a nice 'pick me up' read. If we are nit picking, I suppose I could say that your posts are long because when you give bullet items, you frame a whole sentence.. for example, in your recent post on what you love about the man in your life, you start each point with 'I love..... ' which can be make the post longer. Happy blogging! :)
Caterpillar
from Bangalore |
Thank you Suchismita....will definitely work on that one... :)
Haricharan
from Hyderabad/Chennai |
If you ask me, that last post from you, blew me away... very very cute and nice. I loved it actually...
You just need to use some different words here and there.. as I can see a number of words that get used again and again...
And btw is that a buddha statue in the background ? I can see only the closed eye and the eyebrow.. Excellent pic as background though...
You can read my blog at http://vharicharan.blogspot.com
Looking forward to your review as well (on Indiblogger. There is already a thread here. :( )
Caterpillar
from Bangalore |
Hi again... thanks for the review...yup, that's a Buddha statue....I just dont know how to get the complete picture updated... :(
Caterpillar
from Bangalore |
Hi Hari, thanks a lot for visiting and reviewing my blog... Will definitely come by your blog... :)
Vandana Natu
from New Delhi |
I am still smiling after reading ur blog. Says that as a person you must be quite a sweet one...a little lost at times though :) absolutely adored the post 'A Post to say i love u'...it's long but very very cute....just like all ur writings.
Am not a big fan of 'to be continued' stories so will look it up again when it is complete....plz do not forget to mention the back links of previous parts of the story at the end of the concluding one.
Caterpillar
from Bangalore |
Hi Vandana....Thank you for dropping by my blog, thank you for the encouraging words as well...... I did the story with the 'To be continued' tag coz I have no idea where it's heading... :)