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Uday Mane
from Mumbai |

My blog is all about short stories.. I experiment a lot with writing. I have tried my hand at fables, dramas, crime fiction and love stories. Hope you will like them. I would appreciate if you review the blogs and help me improve with your suggestions.

P.S: I am open to criticism  Smile

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umesh derebail
from Mumbai |

Cool It is a good beginning, i hope you will dare to publish a novel in future, i too had a desire, but when one writes in fictional world it seems to for the purpose of time pass only.  I had desired to be more autobiographical.....let us wait and watch......

umesh derebail
from Mumbai |

Secret Keepers secret is excellent story telling ....i liked the narration and clarity of thought, poor king s confession bought him misery, but poetic justice was done by parrot....if you have a sequel for this story.....i would be thrilled to read.....try it you may succeed.

umesh derebail
from Mumbai |

Hello dear Uday, pl load your profile picture you will lot more hits......Lolz Cool

Uday Mane
from Mumbai |

Hi Umesh. Thanks a lot for your reviews. I am new on Indiblogger and have been struggling with it. Will definitely upload the profile pic soon. Thank you for your time and opinions. Really appreciate. Smile