A Magazine Of Pure Awesomeness

Hi

Went through most of your Magazine.

It's great! But like everything, improvements can be made. I'll try and mention a few here.

• A person has to necessarily read this magazine in Full screen mode which is a bit of pain for same since most people like to multi-task, so they should be able to see wen they get a message on facebook and messengers without switching away from the magazine. Hence, Try and increase the size of the magazine as you show it on the webpage. Make it at least thrice in width and accordingly in height.
• There are two ways to navigate in your magazine, page-by-page or directly to the first or last page. If possible, insert Next section and prev section navigations as well.
• In the section about Apple, the logo is stretched unproportionately which makes it look unprofessional. fix that.
• Whenever you use such a distinct background (like Apple), do not half paste pictures on them. The logo should be either visible or completely hidden. You can try skipping the logo from the background when it is only partially visible. Also the Apple logo contains both White and Black which makes reading the text difficult. You need to work on that.
• In the Cars section, do not put small images. Put the images so that they cover atleast half the page. That makes it much better.  
• Also, the size of the images used should be largely uniform. it should not be 100x100 on page and 200x200 on another. Try and have all of them of the same size.
• In the fashion section, you have used collages. Whenever you use collages, dedicate an entire page to it. You can probably make the left page for collage and right for text here.
• The logo of teams should be in a 1:1 ratio and of same size as other teams.
• In general, all the images should be in the correct ratio and not stretched in any way.

That's it for now.

Pls review my blog as well - HERE

Thank you, Genobz.

Will certainly look into those problems for the next issue of the magazine!