Would really appreciate feedback on my blog so that I can improve
I am a newbie to the world of blogging, would appreciate some feedback on my blog http://gawdsowncountry.blogspot.com so that I can improve my blog.
I've only read this post and this might be judging a book by it's introduction (not cover, mind you) but your writing style is unvelievably silly.It is possible that you're subtly trying to be sarcastic. In which case, I should point out that it is by far too subtle.Even the issue is not a pertinent one. The common man will always remain common, the average will remain mediocre - that is the definition of the things. The average man will follow, and thus may be compared to cattle.
The layout is nice, though. Except for the picture behind the title, it marrs the visibility of the title.
I apologise for jumping the gun with the review, but it seemed as if the first post was written by somebody else.
Perhaps that was because your sarcasm was too thickly vieled.
The second post had great flow of language, occasional alliterations and assonances to make it an even more enjoyable read.
You should keep writing, contrary to my previous statements, which I once again apologise for.
Thank you for your feedback. I really did have my own doubts about the pic behind the title. And no apologies needed. Everyone is entitled to their opinion.