Hey Arti! Hey Arti! Hey!
(I'll try not 2 b mean ;))
At the onset, let me say what I think are some of the good things (there obviously r many but just highlighting the Top Of Mind ones):
1. Your blog is phenomenally popular (definitely more popular than mine :P)
2. You like travelling to relegious places so it'll be easy for u 2 bring about constant updates.
3. You are lookin fr feedback which is really a great thing. (Bravo Arti, Bravo!)
Now for the areas where I feel u could bring bout improvements. Please note that these r nt negetives (Pls also note tht I hv not yet brought out the mean side of me) :
1. Ur blog is titled "My Yatra Diary" though I dont see u. Anywhere. :) My suggestion is try personalizing ur blog with pics f u so tht ppl readin the blog cn put a face to the writer..it'll help 2 relate 2 ur write up better.
2. Try thinking urself "why wud anyone want to go2Arti's blog 2 read on Magh Mela?" Mentally try gettin answers to this question. Try this exercise n hopefully u cud cum up wid ways 2 better ur blog. I'm sure a lotta ppl wud've gone 2 the places which u've chronicled. Some of them mite even hv a blog2capture their experiences. Hell, sum of em cud hv even taken better pics. (See, nw my mean side is surfacin - wish u cud see my pointed evil eye brows n my forked tail :)). So y wud anyone wanna cum to Arti's blog 2 read on dis rather thn choose the others? So try 2 bring out ur own experiences in it. Maybe an interestin fact or a personal story tht happened 2 u when u were thr, in adition 2 ur experience.
3. Try bringing out tips fr travellin 2 tht place so tht a person who mite wanna go der cn get tips as 2 mayb whr 2 eat, whr 2 stay, how much wud it take fr a person 2 go around, wht r the othr areas of suggested tourism, must see places etc etc.
Well, hope dis helps. Always a pleasure criticizing others ;)