Hoping to improve my blog with some true teviws!
Hay, Could you please review my blog? Suggest me some changes if requires and improvements.
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Your style of writing smacks of genuine urge to share thoughts. However would suggest that you need to work on your langauge a little bit, make it more crisp, hardhitting and sharp. One tip to do that is avoid using" Passive voice" and write as much as it is possible in "active voice". Keep senetences short, and do not try to give too much information in one senetence. Good going, keep writing:-)
you have a nice blog. liked it.
you have a nice blog. liked it.
