Please review my humour cum short stories blog

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mr sandeep...firstly ur  blog  is  quite  a  blog...pretty  impressive...but  i've been noticing that it isnt been updated  frequently....nice  posts...stories....and a nice bunch of talented friends  you  have sandeep....template is  not so  cool ..so better stick to a  simple template...congragulations for winning the caption contest  at the writers  lounge..coutesy: your recent blogpost..

hmm,i don't see much of humour in your  blog..yeah mussadi man series was  impressive.Actually loved reading each and evry part...innovative blogger you are and your works are really appreciative...just dedicate few more time for your  blog....and everything would be great

cheers,

the solitary writer

http://thesolitarywriter.blogspot.com/

Interesting title and side bar captions! Must write more often!

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Interesting post that one about captions to movie shots. I was reading "I turn one" and I saw something that I realized soon after I started blogging. Knowing when to use paras. Would give more breathing space to the eyes. Please loose the "...." from the posts.

And the ICICIICICICICICIIII ads hamper reading. Only if you would go low on the traffic light words (red-green), it would make visitors stay more on the site. The content is pretty innovative and demands attention. But you need to allow it to hook the reader by cleaning up your templates.

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