Looking for review on my thriller story. Strings attached between past, present

Will the History students discover what they're after? An ancient lore of Indian Monarchy that the Britishers supressed. An ancient lore that revealed the truth behind the society in Pre-British period. Aristocrats and Untouchables. Read more at 'When Pratham Writes'. A personal recreational blog by Prathamesh Deshmukh, a 17 year downtown Indian teenager to share his fictional reads, an outcome of the hyper-thinking disorder of his IIT-Aspiring mind