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Afsha
Afsha
from Mumbai
14 years ago

Here's the link to my blog (just changed the design and layout)... please go through it if you can and suggest some content you think you'd like me to cover. I'm really into short fiction but i'm thinking of taking a bite out of reality as well. Do you think I can do it? Awaiting feedback! Thanks a mill... Afsha

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Kshitij
Kshitij
from Faridabad
14 years ago

Hey Afsha,

I am reading your vlog. Will write my feedback points now:

  • Need more posts
  • You manage to catch attention, but I think you need more humorous stories. I think that is precisely why you are asking for topics. Let me think of some topics... I myself am working on 1. Your topics at the bottom...
  • There is too much stuff on the right hand side yaar. I think you need to clean something up. Does anyone care about the live traffic feed? I dont know; I am new. But, i did not feel like looking at it on anyone's blog.
  • I can't say anything about the template/format... don't specialise in it.
  • I think you need to make your posts more sarcastic and dramatic - in the same thing that you have been writing.. I mean add mirch masala.
  • I think the titles need to be wackier. Suggestion: Hindi titles, at times, work well

I dont know what else to say. If you find any of my thoughts baseless, kindly ignore.

 Here are my suggestions: Write your review of the worst bollywood movies, describe something that tells us how crazy people have become... just some random thoughts. have a good day.

Afsha
Afsha
from Mumbai
14 years ago

Thanks! It actually does feel a lot less cluttered without the side apps. i realised i dont look at other people's side apps either. Just gets in the way. Thanks for the feedback... :)