Please review my blog "smaran" & give me feedback so that I can improve.
This blog is about my ideas ,my remembrance about everything.
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Liked smaran quite much just as an experiment try active tense and maybe some dialogues. Manytimes I figure that it makes the reader more involved. This is a readers point of view.
Thank you so much ,Parwati Singari for ur review.I witll try to improvise as per ur suggestions.
