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[ http://www.captiveofthoughts.com/ ] IndiRank: 40

Captive Of Thoughts - Review.

Tanishq
Tanishq
from Mumbai
7 years ago

 

More than an year to last review. Looking forward to some critics and appraisers. Thankyou.

Dew drops falling off a leave, to which it no more belonged. Welcome to my blog, a sentence, without a full stop. by Tanishq Sharma.

 

Edited 5 years ago
Reason: An Year To Review, Asking Again.
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Hemal Shah
Hemal Shah
from Mumbai
7 years ago

Hi Tanishq, 

Welcome to IB Reviews!

Here is my reivew:

  • The theme is dark for the title I guess - but this makes it a bit difficult to read
  • Darker red heading may go against the black as negative, even more difficult to read
  • there is a lot of clutter on the page, including adverts, which make reading difficult
  • You could better the navigation, and reduce the clutter. 
  • There are many other black themes (recommend Pixel) you may choose over the current one
  • You could better do with consistant fonts.. that is easier to look at a page..
  • Remember, for a blogger, the reader needs to pay attention.

Hope I am not too harsh, just my opinion. 

Thanks,

Hemal

Tanishq
Tanishq
from Mumbai
7 years ago

Thanks a lot hemal, I would definitely revert back to these suggestions :)

Hemal Shah
from Mumbai
7 years ago

No probs! Just do your best, you may never know who loves your blog theme after all.. that is just my prespective. 

Tanishq
Tanishq
from Mumbai
6 years ago

An year to the last review by Indianomics! Anyone here to do it now? :)

Shivam Ralli
Shivam Ralli
from Ghaziabad
5 years ago

Okay, this has to be one of the nicest blog I have stumbled across. The work is marvellous, but I have a few suggestions which are based on my personal experience and my own POV, it's up to you to act on it. 

  • First it the blank space one sees here. Why is it there? http://prntscr.com/60xt5r suggestion: http://prntscr.com/60xx1e
  • Only one blog post shows up, it would be better if the posts are in a grid form with only a short glance on what the matter contains. It increases the interest on what the user wants to pick up from a variety of posts. 
  • The "Recommended for you is way to below, one would miss seeing that, it would be better if you keep it like this: http://prntscr.com/60xut3 instead for: http://prntscr.com/60xtu0
  • This looks as if we are getting a popup animation (http://prntscr.com/60xv5a) it would be better if it was something like this:http://prntscr.com/60xvmy (like keeping it simple and short, instead of a fancy one, but then again, it's totally up to you)
  • This could be like only the top 3 this week and making the scrolling a bit short? http://prntscr.com/60xvzj
  • Only one would be preferable, right? http://prntscr.com/60xwfa
  • And as i keep saying to everyone, why not get a modern theme? This looks nice (way better than r ka theme, that looks old.) But you could make it a bit more user friendly and help people to look for more posts easily, right?
  • Remove this, it has no use and is redundant as it is nearly invisible. http://prntscr.com/60xxqz

True, this theme is way better than this http://web.archive.org/web/20140124123840/http://www.captiveofthoughts.com/ Tongue out

Now, to end all my complaints, your blog is nice, like really nice. I just had some problem with the design, i prefer this one in fact: http://web.archive.org/web/20141205083046/http://www.captiveofthoughts.com/

Aside from these issues (these are what i think, not what the regular user would) I love the matter on your blog. Way to go Laughing (Just keep in mind, that your blog looks like "COOL" in front of r ka dibba jaisa blog theme Tongue out )

Tanishq
Tanishq
from Mumbai
5 years ago

Thanks a lot Shivam, it means a lot. I would definitely look forward to rectifying all the mistakes by the end of March and make it more user-friendly! :

Once again, thanks a lot for taking so much of efforts in making me realize my mistakes brother! :)