divyank would like you to review his/her blog.
[ http://spicymumbaiya.blogspot.com ] IndiRank: 25

please review my blog in terms of grammar and content of it

divyank
divyank
from mumbai
10 years ago

blog is about what I see in mumbai

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Shantanu Banerjee
Shantanu Banerjee
from Mumbai
10 years ago

you asked in terms of grammar here is a flaw i noticed in the first line of the first post

Last time I told you about the little fight that happen between Rahghav and preeti

 

Happen=happened, i am not a grammar police, i think what you write and how you express is what matters. good work, don't think much about grammar, read good stuff, write good stuff.

Hope you liked my feedback, Keep blogging :)