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Hi fellow bloggers ! Please review my blog.

Jyoti Vyas
Jyoti Vyas
from Pune
4 years ago

Hi Frinds,

I am Jyoti, new member of IndiBlogger.. :)

I have posted my first blog which also happens to be my story blog.

I would request you guys to please review and give a feed back on my blog.

here is the link for my blog - https://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=409607

Cheers!!

Jyoti

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Rohan Bhardwaj
Rohan Bhardwaj
from Thane
4 years ago

Hi Jyoti,

Since it is your free blog at wordpress, I guess you just needed a free space to write your thoughts and you did that pretty well. No fuzy things, simple posts straight up. I liked it.

But, if you are hoping it to be read by other people, lets say your friends, then it will be tough. In online or in books, paragraphs should be of two to three sentences to make it a good read.

Like I did in this reply, I left a line break after two sentences, it looks good and people read more. If you can help with your expectations from this blog, I can add more to my review. Hoping to hear from you soon.

Take care. :)