Please review my poetry blog"
Though I myself write poems, after going through your blog, I do not deem myself fit enought o judge it. The poems you write are very deep and touching, that is all I can say. They haave a sense of simplicity in them, yet describe most complicated situations. Felt very good after reading such good hindi poetry after a long long time. Reminded me of school days.
I can't suggest anything about the content, its near perfect, but the layout can sure be changed. You ccan make the central writing area wider and the widgets can be rearranged and be provided certain propertiess which will make them appear only on the pages where theey are meant to be, and not everywhere. This will help decreasing the loading time.
बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया नवनीत जी ..आपकी बतायी सलाह पर जरुर अमल करुँगी ..आपको मेरा लिखा अच्छा लगा यह जान कर बहुत अच्छा लगा ..बस जो दिल में जैसी बात आती है वैसे ही कलम से यहाँ उतर जाती है ...आगे भी होंसला देते रहे ..तहे दिल से धन्यवाद
very touching..nice poem...gudluck
Your poetry is brilliant.
I agree with Navneet. You have distributed your content in too many places. Some of it is not in Devanagari. Also it is not easy for everyone to click on too many links to get the content.
Regards
Lalit
नमस्ते जी और बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया ..मैं समझी नहीं की मैंने अपने लिंक्स कहाँ कहाँ दे रखे हैं ? यदि हो सके आप मुझे बताये की कहाँ पर मुश्किल आ रही है ..शुक्रिया होंसला बढाने के लिए रंजू
ok these are my blogs aap ko jo accha lage wah hi padhe main waise har jaga sirf kuch meri kalam se ka link deti hun .aapko is se koi asuvdiha hui uske liye khed hai .thanks
