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Would love if you guys could go through and review my blog, Thank You.

Harshadeep Pahurkar
Harshadeep Pahurkar
from Pune
1 year ago

My blog is all about my stupid life experiences, I try to add a flair of humour to all of my otherwise dull and monotonous incidents. I also try to analyse Human Behavior from time to time. 

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The Sorcerer
The Sorcerer
from Mumbai
1 year ago

If its stupid experience but teaches you to be wiser or better, its not stupid. 

I really do not know about .tk domain name.  As much as I don't like clickbait I do approve PUBG clickbait.

The rest of the feedback is based on 'the biggest small-town taboo':

Paragraphs need spacing. The flow of your blog post is like having a script for a podcast or a conversation. Or a letter. Nobody writes a letter. But the way you did the whole writeup reminds me of a Youtube channel called 'the community channel'. Photos would be nice, especially if it actually happened. But you need featured picture. Which also is best if you have your own photos. Even if its 'meh' quality, it is yours. It is not a random picked off from the internet. Nobody likes to read such blogs. When readers land on your main page, that is the first chance you will get to make the best impression. So when I see those 'latest photos' which is supposed to have featured images instead of a black block, the blog looks very bland. Otherwise, the blog is way too young to be judged upon.

 

Have fun. 

Harshadeep Pahurkar
from Pune
1 year ago

"The flow of your blog post is like having a script for a podcast or a conversation. Or a letter. Nobody writes a letter. But the way you did the whole writeup reminds me of a Youtube channel called 'the community channel'." --- So should I change the style of my writing? I mean is that good or bad?

The Sorcerer
from Mumbai
1 year ago

Well if you plan on writing your blog as a diary its fine. But if its storytelling, try experimenting with different styles.

Harshadeep Pahurkar
Harshadeep Pahurkar
from Pune
1 year ago

Sure Thanks, I will try experimenting with different styles.:D