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Looking for a feedback on my blog, short stories is what i write in the blog.

Harsha Chittar
Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Hi I have just started active blogging from about a months time. I have three different blogs of them this one is where i write short stories in. I would love to know, what people think of my stories, it would help me immense to continue write more.

Edited 12 years ago
Reason: was not happy with the previous one.
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Elizabeth Joseph
Elizabeth Joseph
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Nice stories. And the grammer isn't bad enough to stop you from writing :)

Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Thank you very much, my confidence is a little high now. I think i'll post another story today :)

Harsha Chittar
Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

@Elizabeth: Thank you very much, my confidence is a little high now. I think i'll post another story today :)

@Namrata: Thank you very much. I loved your blog, specially I can cook. Left a few comments at your blog :)

Rajeev R Srivastava
Rajeev R Srivastava
from New Delhi
12 years ago

Hi

Good effort. Have you tried to write in Hindi?

 

Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Thank you for your kind words. My Hindi is very weak, i am a local Kannada guy, so my languages in school were Kannada n English. I can write in English, any topic, if you are looking for something. I am very interested in writing.

Harsha Chittar
Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

@Rajeev: Thank you for your kind words. My Hindi is very weak, i am a local Kannada guy, so my languages in school were Kannada n English. I can write in English, any topic, if you are looking for something. I am very interested in writing.

Rajeev R Srivastava
from New Delhi
12 years ago

Harsha

Can you translate kannada poems in English, which in turn can be translated in Hindi by us. We have a literary magazine Akshar Parv in Hindi, in which we encourage new poets/writes, but it should be of quality. You must be aware of good Hindi poets & writers, to make you understand the standard we maintain.

Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

rajeev

          Am not very good at translating poems, so i guess am not much of a help to your blog.

Talking Skull
Talking Skull
from Kolkata
12 years ago

The blog is good. I have never had the 'patience' for stories; so, I am not the best person to comment on the content. Let others do that for me.... :-)

The layout is interesting and great, except for a few improvement areas:

1. You are wasting a lot of space on the right. The main content frame can be wider - that also helps avoid too much scrolling - something that we all hate. For all practical purposes, you are using only 50% of the frame-width available to you. That's a crime!!... :-)

2. If you are using a dark background with white font, you must be using the "Arial" font. In fact, anything except " Times New Roman " font.

Regards,

Sudarshan

http://sbengani.blogspot.com

Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Thank you for reply

I agree with you, am wasting space, i will start working on that.

Never thought of the fonts. Thank you for pointing it out.

Tikulli
Tikulli
from Delhi
12 years ago

Went through your work. Absorbing tales with lot of depth. Liked many of them.

I agree with the font change bit. it will give your blog more style and will be easy for the readers.

have you thought of doing 55 word stories ?

also writing from a woman's perspective.. will be a challenge.

Best wishes.

Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Thank you Tikuli.

Yes I have written a couple of 55 words

http://ithinkiknowbut.blogspot.com/2009/11/eternal-55-fiction.html

Yes the woman's perspective would sure be challenge. It sure is on my mind, will give it a try in some time.  

Smiti Kumar
Smiti Kumar
from Pune
12 years ago

Great blog!

Do visit my blog http://smitikumar.wordpress.com/

Would like to have ur opinion on it

Harsha Chittar
from Bangalore
12 years ago

Hi Smiti

              I read your blog, left a comment :)