Roohani Deshpande would like you to review his/her blog.
[ http://roohani.wordpress.com ]

Please take time to review my blog :)

Roohani Deshpande
Roohani Deshpande
from New Delhi
14 years ago

Hi All,

I'm a 16 year old girl from India who writes about life experiences, articles about opinionated topics like existence of god or choosing a career stream, and basic teenage issues. I have been writing since around 10 months now, and would like a review of my work until now just to see how I'm doing. 

There is a tab called "Feedback" on my blog, whcih is a page meant for anyone who would like to give suggestions regarding the blog. I would appreciate it very much if I could get a feedback on my articles, either here on on my blog. Looking forward to it! :)

 

Roohani Deshpande

http://roohani.wordpress.com

Edited 14 years ago
Reason: .........
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Lalit Singh Chowdhary
Lalit Singh Chowdhary
from Gurgaon
14 years ago

Dear Roohani

Your blog is wonderful, especially the Humour section. You should make your blog interactive so that your friends can leave comments.

A friend of mine made a blog for his daughter interactive by asking people to leave three words and she now writes short stories. I think it is a very cool idea (http://threewordstories.blogspot.com/). You can perhaps think on those lines.

Sorry did not read your article on existence on God because I am more opinionated than you :)

 

Keep writing

 

Cheers

Lalit

 

pundit
pundit
from Oslo
14 years ago

I think your blog is very pretty. I love the visual style (cute colours) as well as the style of your writing (upbeat), and it fits well with the thoughts you're trying to express.In terms of improvement, I think it would be nicer still if the links on top (to home, about, etc.) were working.

Roohani Deshpande
from New Delhi
14 years ago

Thanks a lot, I've implemented most of ur suggestions on my blog :)

sm
sm
from india
14 years ago

wonderful blog

nice template

narration is good .

http://realityviews.blogspot.com/

Roohani Deshpande
Roohani Deshpande
from New Delhi
14 years ago

@Lalit: Thanks a lot, I'll try to make my blog more interactive :)

@Sunil: Thanks, I'll post more frequently

@Pundit n Sm: Thank u both so much :-D

 

 

Naveen kumar
Naveen kumar
from chandigarh
14 years ago

add some links in the " home" "about" options  n post more often 

rest is all awesome 

beautiful blog template , nice widgets 

http://cerebrationlog.blogspot.com/

Roohani Deshpande
from New Delhi
14 years ago

Thanks Naveen, 

The problem is that I don't knw how to link those tabs through html coding, lol, or I would have done so. P.S. Your blog is awesome too! Loved the 'philosopher' tagline  :) 

Pushkaraj Apte
Pushkaraj Apte
from Pune
14 years ago

First of all, congrats for starting off on wordpress instead of blogspot! I have been harbouring the migration from b to w for ages, still don't have the heart to do it.

As for your blog, all I can say is - I don't believe you are just 16 !!!! Such mature writing......

Writers of the world, please look at this girl's writing - and learn from her!

Great job, Roohani. keep it up. I will follow your blog regularly, for sure.

Regards,

Pushkaraj Apte

http://www.express-explore.blogspot.com

Roohani Deshpande
from New Delhi
14 years ago

Thank you so much Pushkaraj! 

And I moved to wordpress just a couple of days back, I had been at blogger for almost a year before I finally decided to switch. :)

Your blog is great! The "Cutting Costs" post invokes thought, for example. Happy blogging :)

Varun Ramakrishnan
Varun Ramakrishnan
from Chennai
14 years ago
  • at 16 ......... i never knew what A BLOG was :)... lol//...
  • a pleasant template... reader-friendly (in computer-terms),
  • with only the 'required' widgets...
  • and your about-me : s too gud... just wat evryone of us experience but v never know to put them in black & white....
  • procrastinator???... i think all bloggers are the same ;) lol...
  • random posts : jus brilliant ....
  • keep posting .. !!! i l keep visiting....

---www.varunpsycho.blogspot.com

 

 

 

Roohani Deshpande
from New Delhi
14 years ago

Thanks a lot Varun, glad that u liked it Laughing

PS: Nice quotes u've got at ur blog :)