is this a poem? how is it?

Nice Peom Pulkit.

My suggestion, feel free to discard it.

I am not at all perfect in writing myself, but here is something that I feel. You needed that little contiuation in your poem. though you have used langs correctly, there is a break that does not encourage a  reader to go deep.

A poem should always take the user deep within...

@ hemal shah - thanks for the reply sir!

@ kadambari - thanks for the motivation dear!

I like the words come from your pen...

Keep blogging. :)

thanks a lot prabhjot! :) ur a follower at my blog bro... but u seldom visit it dear..!!

anyways... thanks for the visit and glad that u liked work :)

god bless!

thanks a lot khushi for the worthy advice.. m working on a poem again... will try to do better this time! hope that I satisfy u more next time :)

thanks dear!